Post 50 - Feedback on your rough cut
After completing my rough cut I screened it to 12 people to gather there opinions and thoughts this is what I gathered
Dave - “It’s so creative! the coloured lighting and use of the police is really mature for an ametuer film maker!”
Liam - “So good! Elly and Edward are amazing, I can’t believe you got the police involved, those shots are stunning!”
George - “Wow good on you for making two videos when only one is needed! maybe tweak some of the shots to stop the audience getting confused”
Chloe - “ Aw the story line is so sad! gorgeous filming though,perhaps change the first video a little to make it flow better i only know what’s happened because i was there during filming!”
Louise - “Gorgwohs music! Elly is so talented, you captured her music beautifully”
Charlie - “Gorgeous but not my type of thing”
Lucy - “i think you need to make some clips shorter because they linger too much, apart from that it’s great”
Debbie - “The ending is so dramatic you don’t know if he’s going to get away with it or not”
Jeff - “perhaps make what he’s done, the drugs, more obvious rather than just a couple of shots, have reminders throughout the videos”
Geoff - “nicely done lansdell, very clever”
Rachel - “That party scene came out nicely didn’t it, very nice with the grainy effect and coloured lighting”
Sarah - “So well filmed, some tweaking and you’ll have nailed it!”
Dave - “It’s so creative! the coloured lighting and use of the police is really mature for an ametuer film maker!”
Liam - “So good! Elly and Edward are amazing, I can’t believe you got the police involved, those shots are stunning!”
George - “Wow good on you for making two videos when only one is needed! maybe tweak some of the shots to stop the audience getting confused”
Chloe - “ Aw the story line is so sad! gorgeous filming though,perhaps change the first video a little to make it flow better i only know what’s happened because i was there during filming!”
Louise - “Gorgwohs music! Elly is so talented, you captured her music beautifully”
Charlie - “Gorgeous but not my type of thing”
Lucy - “i think you need to make some clips shorter because they linger too much, apart from that it’s great”
Debbie - “The ending is so dramatic you don’t know if he’s going to get away with it or not”
Jeff - “perhaps make what he’s done, the drugs, more obvious rather than just a couple of shots, have reminders throughout the videos”
Geoff - “nicely done lansdell, very clever”
Rachel - “That party scene came out nicely didn’t it, very nice with the grainy effect and coloured lighting”
Sarah - “So well filmed, some tweaking and you’ll have nailed it!”
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